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#2  µL¼ÐÃD - ½÷¥J»æ (Super Moderator) µoªí©ó 13-9-2011 10:32

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#4  Very Good A - Mandy@Siu (·|­û) µoªí©ó 25-10-2011 16:58

Keep going~
I think you will be a famous writer soon^^










































(If u work very hard)

#5  µL¼ÐÃD - victorique (°ª¯Å·|­û) µoªí©ó 29-10-2011 13:31

would you like to be a writer too???

#6  µL¼ÐÃD - Mandy@Siu (·|­û) µoªí©ó 2-11-2011 20:29

I think...absolutly not....
I haven't have the talent just like you.....
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